This is an extraordinarily spare piece. I think the declarative sentences really contrast with the uncertainty felt by both the narrator and the reader, creating a sense of tension which lasts long after you finish reading the piece.
I agree with Denis, certainly beautifully written.
As an almost octogenarian, though, I must say that I have put DO NOT (all those things) on my forms, that is exactly what I mean.
All that messing about is what I want to avoid no matter what doctor feels he ought to be helping me live on. Prolonging life is not always in the best interests of the patient - and the patient's best interests are what doctors are supposed consider.
Denis
Wed Jul 29 10:27:58 BST 2009
This is an extraordinarily spare piece. I think the declarative sentences really contrast with the uncertainty felt by both the narrator and the reader, creating a sense of tension which lasts long after you finish reading the piece.
Lovely!
#annie1931
Fri Aug 20 15:49:58 BST 2010
I agree with Denis, certainly beautifully written.
As an almost octogenarian, though, I must say that I have put DO NOT (all those things) on my forms, that is exactly what I mean.
All that messing about is what I want to avoid no matter what doctor feels he ought to be helping me live on. Prolonging life is not always in the best interests of the patient - and the patient's best interests are what doctors are supposed consider.
#Grace6
Thu Aug 04 19:51:24 BST 2011
Very extraordinary Dennis! I hope to see more from this author.
#Grace6
Mon Aug 08 17:55:28 BST 2011
Great point by Denis. Very thoughtful.
#Grace6
Mon Aug 08 17:55:38 BST 2011
Great point by Denis. Very thoughtful.
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